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My heart has yet to be held hostage by love.

I have seen what love can do to people.

It can take a person and give them wings to soar above the clouds.

It can make you feel invincible.

It can fill your heart with a pleasant warmth.

I have seen so many people fall so deeply and passionately then land in the arms of another.

Yet I have seen people fall and land onto slabs of concrete.

I have seen men have their wings ripped out of their backs.

And I have seen them fall so hard and so fast and crash into a million pieces.

I have seen women become so fooled and so blinded, that they did not see that they were headed straight for a cliff.

I have heard them cry out to the heavens.

No, my heart has yet to be held hostage by love.

And I'm not quite sure I want it to be.
:icontrinity17:
I was inspired to write this by :iconladytirza: :heart:
We were talking and at one point I told her that I had yet to fall in love.
I said that my heart had yet to be held hostage by love.
(or something like that.)

So thanks Fabienne, you are amazing! :love:
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:iconzephelia-rising:
I like the contrast you use from the beginning to the end of this poem. It's quite superb.
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~Trinity17 Jul 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:blush:Thank you very much.
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:iconzephelia-rising:
Quite welcome, of course!
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:iconladytirza:
Oh now I once was an ispiration for someone :blush:
Nice, I really like your writing :D
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~Trinity17 Jul 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much, I owe this one to you. :huggle:
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:iconmoonstress:
wow....just lovely :*)
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~Trinity17 Jul 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :heart:
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:iconureisora:
:rose:Wow... just... wow... (A good wow btw):dance::heart:
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~Trinity17 Jul 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:iconblushplz: Thanks I'm glad you like it.

And thanks for the fave.
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